Just chillin'

On my mission to read every book from Erin Hunter, I bought Bluestar's prophacy and read it in 2 days. 
Neehoo, I wanted to draw something, and as I drew the poses this scene came to mind. 
Just paraphrasing: 

_{Bluefur wandered through a grassy glade and pushed her way past a wall of ferns. She was thirsty, and the river was burbling nearby. The bushes there were still lush; this part of the forest was sheltered from chilly nights and cool breezes.  Bluefur peered through a bush and down the leaf-strewn bank.
A reddish-brown pelt moved in the shallows. Fox?
She tasted the air warily. Stiffening, she recognized the tang of RiverClan. She stared in astonishment as Oakheart padded out on the ThunderClan side of the river, barely three tail-lengths from Bluefur. He shook himself like a dog, then stretched out on a smooth stone sloping up from the water. He was going to sleep! On ThunderClan territory!
Bluefur tensed, ready to spring out and confront the trespasser. Then she paused. He looked so peaceful. Caught in the moment, she found herself watching his flank rising and falling. What am I doing?
She plunged through the bushes and skidded to a halt behind him, sending small stones rattling down to the water. 
“Get out!” Oakheart lifted his head and glanced over his shoulder. “Bluefur!” He could at least act guilty! She’d caught him on ThunderClan territory.
“Just because you took Sunningrocks,” she hissed, “doesn’t mean you can help yourself to any piece of territory you want.” Her pelt sparked with fury.
“Sorry.” Oakheart got to his paws. “I couldn’t resist such a sunny spot.”
“You couldn’t resist?” Rage choked her. “You arrogant fur-ball!”}


^What I started from
The background is crap and isn't at all what I wanted it to be, but I'm fed up of painting over it again and again .
Work has been sucking the life out of me for months now and this is the first time in ages I've felt like doing anything artistic.
I've made the full view bigger than usual for the sole reason that I want you to see his fluffy belly up close